Saturday, March 1, 2014

Coffeeshop Writer's Group - My poem: The Sorrow of the Gift of Netflix

We always have such a great time at our writer's group. Allan M Heller is the new Poet Laureate of Hatboro! He called up Mayor Norman Hawkes and applied, sending in some of his poetry, many of which are published online.

Then he read his poem, "So Now I'm Poet Laureate." In the poem he mentioned he can now thumb his nose at all the online magazines which clearly couldn't appreciate his creativity.

Save the date: Thurs nite, April 24, at 7 pm, Allan's inaugural reading at the Hatboro Library.

Donna Krause on the right always shares her poems with her boyfriend Denny. Her poem "Time" concerned how quickly time fades away. Wish I had some quotes.

In her poem she used ellipses - ... - dots, as if to say, here's what's coming next.

In the book I'm reading for my book club - Despair by Vladimir Nabokov - he mentions the suspense generated by those three little dots. Natch, I said to Donna, I thought of YOU!

Linda Blue Sweater Barrett wrote two wonderful poems: "Winter Hope," in which God gives us a rainbow to make up for the bad weather and "The Spring of Living Water" about Jesus appearing to the poet who has a deep spiritual hunger, sorta like my hunger for a hot cuppa tea.

I sipped on this tea during our meeting, Harney and Sons, and then bought a box from Adryn.

Best tea I ever drank! Reuse your tea bags, readers! Life isn't cheap.

Beatriz and Carly, where art thous?

Carly and husband Charlie have season tix for the Walnut Street Theater. She wrote an essay about the last play they saw there - Other Desert Cities.

Carly had a tuff time hearing the actors so she finally got up and asked for some sort of hearing device they did provide her with. YOW! TOO LOUD! By the end of the play, she figured it out. Tho she didn't say it in her piece, she probly missed the entire play b/c she was so concerned with the awkward device.

Next victim! Beatriz. "Brainy Bumble Bees" was about the larger cousins of honeybees, all female, who learn where to gather the best nectar. She referred to them as "The Einstein of Bees."

Undoubtedly, they return to our flowers many times as they must remember their food source, just as we return to shop at the Giant. A keen observer, biologist Beatriz can spot young bumbling bumble bees who are just learning their trade. They LEARN to be better foragers.

Martha read a fascinating poem about being a substitute teacher to children who are caught up in the technological generation. At first she complained about it - she does have one of those iPads - but at the end of the poem, she grew to accept it.

I was SO not in the mood to write this morning, but finally dragged my fat ass upstairs to write a poem I thot of last nite when watching "The Card" on Netflex.



Note that Petula Clark - yes, the singer - was in it. She's now all of 84 years old. And married to the same man since 1961.



I always visit Mom and Ellen after the Writer's Group. Potholes? I actually wrote a Letter to the Editor which goes like this:

Here's my temporary solution to protecting our cars from potholes.

Road crews should go out and paint white circles around the potholes so vehicles can spot them from afar.

They might also fill them with pebbles, until such time as they can patch them up.



THE SORROW OF THE GIFT OF NETFLIX

They have all gone away.
Ann Todd, Trevor Howard
Claude Rains.
Caught in a lover’s triangle –
poor Annie was obsessed with
her first love, tall, straight-backed
Trevor, with long brow and
eyes that even David Lean
could not capture on the
Silver Screen – she stares
down the railroad tracks
and we fear …..
but I shan’t give it away.

On the small screen of my laptop
I press the “Pause Button”
and falling into that smoky sleep
that comes before the deeper one
find the three of them
at the Masquerade Ball
I arrive in dyed blond hair
and a slinky white-sequined gown
“Let us sit and sip the
champagne,” I say
cocking my head.

We sit beneath the clock.
“I am the Countess of Chell,”
I say, referring to the movie
“The Card” with the late
Alec Guinness, much more
handsome here at table
than the older one
whose ears could power
a wind mill atop Raytharn Farm

“I say, quite a good crowd
tonight!” I toast, then sip the
bubbling House of Rothschild
champagne
My mouth won’t speak
as I try to warn
Ann, Trevor and Claude
about the battles ahead,
their own little war waged
in two hours, rather than
the mighty battles
on our green planet,
soiling the earth with red,
my companions’ battles are
fought with their own blood
dribbling from three
separate hearts.

Alas, I have drunk
too much and am
tipsy. My head falls
upon the table,
next to the burgundy
linen napkin.
“May I escort you
to the terrace?” says
Trevor.
I take his arm, lift
up my skirts so as
not to trip and we
breathe the fresh air
of the London suburbs,
looking down at all
the twinkling lights
of the city and then up
at the galaxies
far far away.

“You are beautiful, my
Countess,” he says,
and kisses my hand.

He is a gentleman.
I tell him I must take
my leave, kiss him on
both cheeks, such a delicious
man is he, and dissipate
finding myself back in
my living room, savoring
my dream.
Or was it?
























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