Hey, wouldn't it be fun to have a spelling Bee with senior citizens?
When I woke up this morning I spent 40 blissful minutes reading in bed. To do so, I must give myself orders: You will NOT read the new Newsweek. Instead, you'll read Freedom by Jonathan Franzen, which Ron gave me.
I'm a third done, but when you read five other books at the same time, you've gotta remember to go back before you lose the thread.
I did remember the two main characters - Patty and Walter - but couldn't remember who Richard was. 'It'll come to you,' I said. 'Keep reading."
And it came. Along with an idea for a poem. Here's my first draft and maybe the last.
71 DEGREES
unknown sounds at dawn
quilt up to my chin,
i swivel my ears
what's that sound?
rumbles from underground
like rivers fill my walls
my bed will soon be
swept away in waters
and I shall drown
a shower
of warmth descends
from slats in the ceiling
i stretch my toes
throw off the covers
and feel the
kindness
of warmth
spreading through
my organs,
licking my
cold face
stealing upstairs
the thermostat has
clicked on:
71 degrees.
Who knew that
heat in the chill of
autumn was
as a fine glass of
wine
taken
in the woods.
Enjoyed this poem!! Again, taking a mundane object or experience and making us notice them in a fresh and interesting way, is your strength and also in a delightful and often beautiful way.
ReplyDeleteI, too, read multiple things at once. I am looking to order the UN-DSM. Will tell you more when I get it but it sounds intriguing and Freedom is also on my list.
Oh a spelling bee for seniors sounds like great fun!!!
The Couch Lady huh? Wish I had known. We ended up with a perfectly good, almost brand-new dark green sofa bed from Art's mother. Brother was supposed to take it but didn't and it was too good to discard, so Art brought it to CT. I didn't want it but after it attacked the wallpaper and molding in the hallway as we struggled to get it upstairs, it has settled in. It might have been a lot easier to give it to you if you had any interest at the time. Oh well.
in fact, iris, i'm waiting right now for my new couch to arrive! i see you successfully posted a response. hallejah! btw, that's a song by leonard cohen but i love the k.d.lang version on youtube. know it?
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