They asked me to substantially shorten it, which I did, after brewing a cup of coffee.
You know what, Dear Reader?
I kid you not. A good cup of coffee is just about my favorite thing in the world.
Read my true story here.
You may think I'm on a roll having a few of my stories - and "Nazi Waters" at last - published. Indeed, I am very grateful and proud they've been published.
Yet, some of my best work has yet to be published.
My Jenny - On Good Days I Remember My Name - Uncle Benny's Stradivarius - have yet to find a home.
Just spoke to my friend Carolyn Constable who told me to send my eye doctor the poem "Seven Minutes in Hell" about my experience in the visual field machine.
"Visual field machine." It took me ages to remember that term. Kept getting it confused with "field of vision."
Oh no! I hope I don't forget it again.
This morning I emailed in my entries to Pentimento magazine, HQ'd in Lambertville, NJ, just across the Delaware River from New Hope.
My true story is called The Wrath of Diabetes. I submitted three poems, one of which I wrote this morning in about 45 minutes. It's printed below and is totally fanciful about last nite's lunar eclipse which really could not, in totality, be seen here on Cowbell Road.
BERNICE AND THE LUNAR ECLIPSE
Ninety-three
now, her legs are gone,
so Steve
slings her over his back
and
carries her into his black
Cadillac
with that gorgeous
emblem
like the queen’s jewels
that
proclaims I’m rich, and
settles
her, as she laughs softly,
and
thinks, What fun it is being carried by
a
handsome muscular man,
reminding
her of that wanderlust husband
of hers
she lost a thousand years ago.
I get in
the back
smelling
the still-new interior
leather –
oh no! a cow was
sacrificed
– and gaze out
the front
window. My sister
Ellen,
Mom’s caretaker, slides
in next
to me, still munching a brownie.
We drive
to Woodlawn School
the
highest point in the county
and park
on the empty street.
It’s well
before midnight and
a few
people stand on their
sidewalks.
Some have flashlights
that pass
over their pajama-
clad children.
“Bernice,”
says Stevie. “The
moon’s up
there,” he points.
“I’m not
blind,” says Mom, with
her
flashing new front teeth
-
expensive as real pearls -
the new
dentist drilled in.
Everyone
who sees the lunar
eclipse
makes a Rorschach
of it. I
see it as a round black head
with
white ribbons curling all around.
“Let me
out,” says Mom.
We look
at one another.
“Do it!”
I say to Steve and
we all exit
onto the silent street.
He opens
the huge heavy
door and
we stand Mom
up on the
sidewalk, a rag
doll,
needing support.
“Harold!”
she points at the
moon.
“Harold, wait for me.
You’re
the only man I ever
loved.”
“Daddy,”
I think. Yes, he was
a good man.
And, were he still
among us,
instead of rotting
underground
in Cleveland,
he
would
have driven us here. Wonder
where his
1964 Country Squire
Station
Wagon has gone.
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