tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3497533264000861118.post1026796136133363998..comments2024-03-19T03:19:28.975-04:00Comments on The Belle of Cowbell: The Bipolar Therapist from Willow Grove, PA: Surcease of pain? / Poem: A Sunday DriveRuth Z Deminghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15582780727165466659noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3497533264000861118.post-8968682861336822142010-11-16T22:51:40.080-05:002010-11-16T22:51:40.080-05:00thanks, iris. my almost poetry teacher (class got ...thanks, iris. my almost poetry teacher (class got canceled due to lack of students) wrote me the following: <br />man you wanna talk about fraught with possibilities? You've laid out<br />the theme now elaborate: what i might do first is cut down on<br />descriptive details dont use up the reader's energies or he-she-it''ll<br />be too worn out to grasp the ending. (Not sure the 34 yrs is clear<br />maybe doesnt have to be?) maybe you could get away with a little more<br />on "Quickly" if you didn't take quite so long getting to Lake GalenaRuth Z Deminghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15582780727165466659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3497533264000861118.post-38438991965285450712010-11-16T22:44:58.153-05:002010-11-16T22:44:58.153-05:00This poem is very powerful. I need time to digest...This poem is very powerful. I need time to digest it and to read again, but wow!<br />The one before it I am not getting so definitely want to read it some more and take it in, let it roll around in my head and sit for a while.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com