Saturday, June 29, 2013

Coffeeshop Writers Group - Martha's "Call in the Night" - Happy Birthday to Me - More of Ruth's award-losing poems: The Giant Coffee Card Club - Of a Tuesday Evening in June - Driving Home on Lower York Road

Marf and Arlene. But I was really trying to photograph an 88-yo man you can barely see. He was standing next to me in the coffee line. He asked for a "senior coffee."

It was Martha and Carly's b'day this week. They each bot treats for the group from the Giant. Pardon my honesty, but the cookies and cupcakes looked barfingly unappetizing.



HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME by Martha Hunter

She thinks I'm old
daughter of the dinosuars
plodding along the downside of life's mountain
my mind disintegrating with every passing footfall
my oft recounted memories - mythological
She, smarter in her 13 years
than I in my 60s
for after all, her science teacher
taught them about the eventual death of brain cells.
She doesn't know that inside ever grandma
is an 18 year old beauty
replaying history on endless loop
hoping for a different outcome.
She pats my hand,
and shouts into ears that work just fine,
HAPPY BIRTHDAY GRANNY AND MANY MORE!"
wondering as she says it,
how many more can there be
in one so old as I?
*****
You'll understand why I wrote the following poem upon ordering a barfingly rich drink. It was scrumptious! When I got home my blood sugar was a disgraceful 279.
 THE GIANT COFFEE CARD CLUB

We call ourselves the Coffeeshop Writers Group
cuz that’s where we meet
I have written all manner of poems and short stories
entered them
in prestigious magazines
expecting rejection
receiving rejection
won’t stop me from trying
First thing I do when I get to the group
is get me a decaf
a small buzz is always nice
nothing dramatic like
a full-blown mania
but that was in the past
I’ve worked my way up
so that today the decaf
is free with my Club Card
what’ll it be on this last
Saturday in June?

None of the coffee’s any good
I doctor it with
cinnamon which floats on
the surface
like grease on the griddle
impossible to
homogenize
I'll order a free cup of cold decaf
ice clinking on the bottom
I feel ashamed to enjoy it
while Alan dies of lung cancer
in Cleveland
Who knows?
maybe Cleveland Clinic
has a pilot program
to keep him alive
the only one his
crippled son
loves at Beth Israel


Ever feel helpless?
ever feel like standing
beneath the big ole moon
and craning your neck
and saying
Please.
Please.
Please.  

Martha Hunter wrote:

A CALL IN THE NIGHT

She struggles up through a dream,
briefly wondering where she is
A coldness grips her stomach
Calls in the night rarely bring good news.
A voice gives her the message
no mother wants to hear.
She wonders,
is this a cruel joke?
She thinks to hang up in disgust
But her hand grips the phone too tightly
to let go.
She doesn't want to believe it's true.
Primal instinct holds off the force of the blow
An island of motherhood
in an ocean of tragedy.
She'll do what she needs to do
And collapse later.
Her son needs her now.

And now, gleaning from my stock photos....
 
Beatriz had a bout of exhaustion so she stayed home. I spoke to her and she was laffing about it. These episodic cycles have occurred since she was in her thirties. She will get tested again to see if it's a certain type of bug bite she got while living in Argentina, altho it never showed up.

Her son is exhibiting mild symptoms b/c it can be contracted in utero.

What was God thinking?


There's no treatment, said B, but at least she'd find out the cause.

Linda Barrett below. All these fotos are from my archives.


Linda and her 83-yo mom just joined LA FITNESS!!!

Linda shared a chapter of her sci-fi novel. Some idiot at a writer's group she goes to at B & N told her she could get sued for writing about the SEPTA transportation system.

He's probly jealous of her imagination.

Donna Krause was nervous about reading her new poem "Alone at Night."

Since she was widowed a year ago, she hates being alone esp at night, when she sees eerie shadows on the wall.

Everyone thought it was a wonderful poem.


Carly Brown .... Carlana

Carla and Donna have become good friends. They encourage one another and read their poems and other work to each other.

Donna asked Carly "What's happening with your story about Nails, the roofer?"

That gave Carly the incentive to get back to work on it.

Carly read an obit about the roofer  - nicknamed "Nails" - who died a natural death and transformed it into a suspenseful story about a roofer who falls off the roof.

We loved it and are looking f/w to reading more at our meeting next Saturday.

Auteur! Auteur! of the next poem. Oh, here she be, riding the NY subway with daughter Sarah Lynn:




OF A TUESDAY EVENING IN JUNE

it’s late
but the coffee’s hot
and I am reading
on my red couch
Remains of the Day
it’s taking off, finally,
is it the coffee that
makes it so?
I stop for a sip
and a “think”
the cup between
my legs
warming my
inner thighs
The back jacket
calls the novel
“brutal”
but like a
bad marriage
we quickly accept it
marveling at the
author’s roundabout
language
sentences so long
you hurry to
the finish line
So many stories
like my own,
the needle marks
I glance at casually
in the crook of my arm
made at the last blood draw
Don’t worry,
I’ll be around for a while

I lift my still-warm
but not hot cup
and bring it to my lips
how fresh it smells
I made it myself
Roasted Sumatra
When Stevens the butler
and star of the book
decides to alight
from his Ford
where he is motoring
about the famed
sloping green meadows
smooth as a tear
I insert the bookmark
switch off the light
and whirring fan
then open the door
for one last look
smell the misty rain
which wants
nothing to do with me
and hoping for a
crack of thunder
or something
exciting, since the
book is not
and
about to close
the door
see a giant
orange moon
plum over
the street light
and the sleeping
baby birds,
swallows, this time,
we think.  

 
This book by Kazuo Ishiguro, b. 1954, is on The Guardian's list of 100 Best Books. Kazuo was born in Japan but lives in London.  Sarah suggested I read it.




DRIVING HOME ON LOWER YORK ROAD, BUCKS COUNTY

This is the kind of road I like
hilly 
with vistas
green meadows
farmlands sown with corn
The Sox Lady
art galleries
and restaurants
the well-heeled “others” go to

The gray Ford pick-up is behind me
never saw his face
but it’s the kind of man
I’d choose were I looking
and I always am
I try to be a good
road companion
soaring well in front of him
then braking to show there’s
traffic up ahead

Meanwhile the erratic
Lexus, who should know better,
is holding up the fast lane
with the narcissism
we expect from the
nouveau riche

I am unconcerned
as I sip my Columbian Decaf
I bought back in Peddler’s Village
when I got off the bus from New York
I could be home on my
red couch
watching the birds out the window
but I’m in the front seat
sipping hot coffee
with my right hand
watching my man
in the rear view
and thinking of home.

The light is green
I take off at great speed
breaking off our brief affair
my car a steed racing toward home
I turn the radio off as I climb
my hilly street
so the neighbors
will think me sedate
and orderly.
Could my frontyard pink Buddha give me away? 


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